In a dim-lit room, I see her walking in,
Her magnetic presence, draws me in.
I try to resist, and keep my distances,
But her attraction, leaves me defenseless.
As my thoughts float away, into clouds of bliss.
I’m lost in a world, where only imagination exists.
I tell myself: “She’ll only bring you sorrows—
just like the others.”
But what can I do, I long for her touch,
To hold her close, I need it so much.
I know, I should’ve learned by now,
But love’s so uncertain, somehow.
Her smile weakens my resolve, it’s true,
And my heart aches, as she comes into view.
When I saw her walk into the room,
I knew I needed her,
I tell myself, leave the girl alone,
She’ll only break your heart.
But I’m a man and I’m alone,
I need someone to hold and call my own,
I know, I should’ve learned by now,
But when I see her smile, my heart melts.
Please don’t leave, too soon,
Please don’t leave, so soon.
In a haze-filled room, a love story begins,
As I set my eyes on her, the old chapter ends.
I try to elude her and keep my distance,
But I can’t resist her allure’s persistence.
In a spell for her longing, I slip into a trance,
Another dance of fate, a hopeless romance.
I know the danger, the chances involved,
Yet her attraction leaves me unresolved.
So what can I do, I long for her touch,
To hold her close, I need it so much.
I let go of doubts, of a future untold,
And let her slip in, to my troubled soul.
I surrender to her feminine charm,
Forsaking the risks; breaking the calm.
When I saw her walk into the room,
I knew I needed her,
I tell myself, leave the girl alone,
She’ll only break your heart.
But I’m a man and I’m alone,
I need someone to hold and call my own,
I know, I should’ve learned by now,
But when I see her smile, my heart melts.
Please don’t leave, too soon,
Please don’t leave, so soon.
In a well-lit room, a love story unfurls,
In her gaze, my new universe swirls.
Her eyes hold secrets, her smile a mystery,
As she moves closer, my heart beats intensely,
With each graceful step, she stirs up my soul,
Awakening emotions beyond my control.
I fight the urge to reach out and touch,
For fear of loving her, too early; too much.
I surrender to the magic, only she weaves,
For in this moment, my heart now believes.
I let go of the doubts, of what love could be,
Knowing that in her arms, I’ll find eternity.
Edited by: ElRoyPoet, 2024
The Turmoil of Desire: An Analysis of Vulnerability in Love
In the realm of poetry, few themes resonate as deeply and universally as the emotional complexities of love. The poem captures the speaker’s attraction to a captivating woman who enters the room, bringing forth a rush of conflicting emotions that intertwine desire with trepidation. Through its vivid portrayal of longing and the inherent risks of romantic entanglement, the poem masterfully articulates the delicate balance between yearning and heartache, inviting readers to reflect on their own experiences with love.
At the heart of the poem lies the speaker’s undeniable attraction to the woman, whose mere presence ignites a surge of emotion within him. The initial allure is palpable, as her entrance marks a turning point in the speaker’s internal landscape. His attraction is not merely physical; it is a whirlwind of emotional energy that prompts reflections on past heartbreaks. Here, the poem delves into the duality of desire and pain, suggesting that love is often an intricate dance between longing for connection and the haunting memories of past betrayals. The tension between these opposing forces forms a central theme throughout the piece, compelling the reader to confront the vulnerability that accompanies love.
The speaker’s acknowledgment of previous heartaches underscores the theme of cognitive dissonance that is so often present in romantic relationships. Despite his recollections of sorrow, he finds himself inexorably drawn to the woman, illustrating a common human contradiction: the awareness of potential pain does little to mitigate the pull of attraction. The repetition of the line “I know I should’ve learned by now” serves as a poignant reminder of the speaker’s introspection and self-awareness. It emphasizes his recognition of the cyclical nature of love and heartache, yet also highlights his faltering resolve in the face of undeniable desire. This interplay between knowledge and emotion speaks volumes about the cognitive conflicts that often frustrate individuals who find themselves at the mercy of love’s undeniable allure.
The emotional climax of the poem is encapsulated in the line “Please don’t leave, too soon.” This desperate plea encapsulates the speaker’s profound vulnerability and his fear of loss. It evokes a sense of urgency, as if he is acutely aware that his time with the woman is but a fleeting moment. The phrase suggests a deep-seated fear of abandonment, carrying the weight of past experiences that inform his present feelings. The juxtaposition of desire and anxiety is a testament to the complexities of romantic relationships; it is a reminder that love, while exhilarating, is also laced with the potential for heartbreak.
Moreover, the emotional turmoil depicted in the poem serves as a broader commentary on the nature of love itself. It speaks to the universal experience of yearning for connection while grappling with the specter of potential heartache. The poem invites readers to contemplate their own vulnerabilities and the risks they take in the pursuit of love. It suggests that the essence of love is not merely in its blissful moments but also in the raw exposure to emotional pain and the courage to embrace it.
In conclusion, the poem captures the essence of love as a multifaceted experience marked by longing, vulnerability, and the relentless push and pull between desire and fear. Through its exploration of the speaker’s emotional struggle, the poem offers a poignant reflection on the human condition, one that acknowledges the risks involved in pursuing romantic connections while simultaneously celebrating the beauty of those fleeting moments. Ultimately, it invites readers to embrace the complexities of love, recognizing that the journey itself—laden with uncertainty and desire—is what enriches our experiences of being human.
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- “Males are hard wired with a higher capacity for love: physical (flesh), emotional (compassionate) and spiritual (faith). Female love is physical (flesh) and emotional (patriotism) only. Men who are separated from a spouse (when she’s obliged to leave) are several times more lightly to break down emotionally versus women. The reason for this is because a husband is supposed to be invested in his wife and kids, to insure his generations will continue. Women on the other hand must be resilient, because the show must go on, with her leading man if possible, but if not, with his understudy and so on.”
- “I was in a beautiful relationship. I shared with her, some of my insecurities as the relationship grew deeper, however that eroded her interest in me over time. She had been an amazing partner and friend up to that day? After that turn of events, I sat down with my mom and explained to her what had happened to us, she immediately told me: ‘that I had made a huge mistake, and that I should now be mature enough to know, that you never share your insecurities or weaknesses with a girl, no matter how much love you believe exists in the relationship, she’ll lose interest, if she’s a good girl; or use it against you, if she’s a bad one’. Advice from a woman that had decades of successful marriage with my dad. Ignore all those female dating coaches that tell you to be emotionally open, share your pain, etc. I found out the hard way, that a man is absolutely never supposed to show vulnerability in front of women, because they just don’t understand!”
- “She is challenging him, which is disrespectful to him. Why should anyone be entitled to challenge anyone, if not to shame or disregard their opinion, values, and ideas? If he allows her to challenge him, she won’t care about what he has to say and won’t even try to understand why he thinks that way. Because he will say whatever she wants to hear and become submissive. She will be the one leading the conversation and ultimately the relationship to its end, when she loses interest in him.”
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